MaxfordAndSons 9 days ago

Sweet! I love erasure (aka blackout) poetry.

If anyone want to see some high quality examples of the form, check out:

- O Mission Repo, by Travis McDonald, an erasure of the 9/11 Comission Report

- A Humument, by Tom Phillips, an erasure of A Human Document, a victorian novel of manners; A Humument is unusual in that each page is beautifully and thematically hand painted over by Philips, not just blacked out or erased as is more typical of the form.

- Radi Os, by Ronald Johnson, an erasure of Paradise Lost

tekknolagi 9 days ago

Hah, nice. I made this crappy version for a friend to use in a joke: https://bernsteinbear.com/redactor/

  • Rendello 9 days ago

    My first recursive-decent parser was for this Discord bot that let people chain these ridiculous text transformations with pipes like in Unix, so:

    > What {you’re refering|uwu|mock} to as {Linux|serif}, is in fact, {GNU/Linux|redact} | clap

    Became:

    > What <clap> uR <clap> rEfEwiNg <clap> to <clap> as <clap> *Linux*, <clap> is <clap> in <clap> fact, <clap> [REDACTED]

    (HN strips all the fun Unicode stuff, so <clap> is the emoji, Linux is in bold serif, and redacted is the black bar.)

    Terrible, I know, but such is the nature of the best chat bots. We used to do a lot of CTFs so I always wanted to be able to connect it to CyberChef and be able to use those functions. Nowadays an LLM could do most of it and more, I suppose.

    https://github.com/rendello/pipe_bot

ray__ 9 days ago

This is really cool! Any tips for finding poems hidden in a large block of text?

It reminds me of the poem composed from one of Trump's tweets: "O, the Pelican. so smoothly doth he crest. a wind god!" There are lots of other examples on r/othepelican.

  • bobbiechen 9 days ago

    (Creator here) It's something I'd like to spend more time on! I didn't have a good time with LLM prompting but I think maybe something deterministic similar to Nutrimatic https://nutrimatic.org/2024/ might produce better results.

  • scottmf 9 days ago

    Seems like a use case for language models.

    • justonceokay 9 days ago

      No one expected that in the future we would be reading AI generated poetry to cats in strollers.

mc3301 9 days ago

I thought blackout poetry was when you write poetry while in a blackout state and can't remember it the next day.